Title: A Promise of More (The Disgraced Lords #2)Publication date: 15 April 2014
Publisher: Random House Publishing - Loveswept
Synopsis:
In the second novel in Bronwen Evans’s sexy new Disgraced Lords series, two very independent souls find themselves fighting to resist a deepening passion.
When Beatrice Hennessey sets out to confront Lord Coldhurst, the notorious rogue who killed her brother in a duel, her intent is to save her family from destitution. She’s determined to blackmail the man into a loveless marriage. She’ll make the wealthy Lord Coldhurst pay for the rest of his life. But while greeting his ship, Beatrice takes a tumble into the Thames—only to be fished out by a pair of strong masculine arms that tempt her to stay locked in their heated embrace forever. That is, until she realizes those arms belong to Sebastian Hawkestone, Lord Coldhurst himself.
The little drowned mermaid has an interesting proposition indeed; one that Sebastian is surprised to find quite agreeable. Although he’s had women more beautiful, she is pleasing to the eye, and besides, it’s time he fathered an heir. Beatrice promises to be the ideal wife; a woman who hates him with an all-consuming passion is far too sensible to expect romance. However, it isn’t long before Sebastian’s plan for a marriage of convenience unravels, and he’s caught up in the exhilarating undertow of seduction.
My rating:
3 / 5
My review:
*ARC generously given by the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review*
Okay, when I first read this book I thought that it was a beginning to a really good story. But towards the middle, I get overwhelmed by the sudden rush of emotions and passion that came out of nowhere that kind of doubled me over.
Because here's the thing. There's just too much going on that didn't need to be told. All I feel was emotion and to be honest these emotions are redundant at times. Don't get me wrong, I love gut-wrenching moments and crying over revelations but somehow I felt detached from this book.
Basically, there's a story. I have to admit I didn't read the first book but although this could be a stand-a-alone, it's barely holding itself together. At first I was curious about the Libertine Scholars, the six handsome titled lords who were friends and are the backbone of this series. But then, THEN, Sebastian asked Beatrice who the Libertine Scholars were and she started listing them ONE by ONE.
Why? Their names were jam-packed in a paragraph along with their titles and mind you, there were 5 other names to memorize because they appear in the book at random times. It's like the author wants all of them to have equal appearance in the book but really I can only remember 3 of them. Quite a feat I must say, with the emotions brewing in every page.
Sebastian and Beatrice's lovestory is mediocre at best. Sure, there were moments where I felt a lump in my throat when they were fighting and a burst of emotion rolled in after. But it died down quickly because the writing was prolonging the moment and I ended up skimming the whole scene. And also, how could you think about your brother's death and still get aroused rather fiercely five minutes later?
It's an okay read for me. Unfortunately, it won't be a memorable one. The writing is good, but the pacing needs work. The climax felt, well, not satisfying enough. I always love a marriage of convenience and this book definitely hit the emotional part of it. It's just that, there was lack of back story and it felt rushed, like the author spent too much detail in one scene and lacking in another.
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